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Rachel Tirta
Nov 10, 09:46 in SoundGym Cafe
any feedback on this one? i think i like it but i feel like it could be better

https://soundcloud.com/musicartist2002/november-project-1

anything helps :)
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John Ackerberg
Nov 10, 09:57
Rachel!

I would focus a little bit on the kick as right now it's barely audible or felt. Combat this by one or a combination of:

1. Raising the volume on the kick.
2. Applying sidechain compression to the bass, ducking when the kick hits.
3. Boosting the low end of the kick (Subtle boost).

Other than that I would encourage you to spend more time in production as this track sounds like early alpha for me.

Good luck! =)
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Sun Catcher
Nov 10, 14:00
YES focus on the track called Bounce 2 the melodies, the haunting synths and ESPECIALLY those subdued and hidden vocal washes THAT is your sound, it's beautiful, unique, not the first time Ive heard ethereal female voices BUT.... you are NOT giving your voice enough credit, push it WAY up in the front, drop the tip tap drums for a rich, sluggish industrial tuned down sample loop, something that sounds like an assembly line machine, but KEEP the synth pads, the progression, and especially the vocals, turn those up, get it in front of the mix, sing it in the shower, sing it in the car, sing it LOUD, build up your confidence because that track is going to be a HIT if you can get it up there! Get it to Jason Pettigrew, he was chief music editor at Alternative Press for 30 years and LOVED the Cocteau Twins (you music is similar, at least this track) and will probably help you by recommending the right label if you was to go that way. Engineering wise listen to this guy above Im a producer and publisher, but John Ackerman seems like he knows what he's talking about. Good luck!
Congrats @Meet Coo for winning the Diamond Ears Award!
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Btz Thibodeau
Nov 08
Now your ears are one of the toughest materials on the planet along with being highly accurate, congrats! 😜🙌
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Paul Vincent
Nov 10, 13:14
Congratulations!
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DJ aoe
Nov 10, 13:49
Congrats 👏
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SoundGym
Nov 10, 04:57 in SoundGym Official
Congrats @Danny Onionz for winning the Golden Ears Award!
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John Ackerberg
Nov 10, 09:57
Great job Danny! On to the next! =)
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Btz Thibodeau
Nov 10, 12:58
Excellent!
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SoundGym
Nov 10, 12:08 in SoundGym Official
Congrats to @Magghy Ji for having the top track in the chart this week with 'I Want It All'!
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Btz Thibodeau
Nov 10, 12:58
Nicely done!
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Romano G
Nov 10, 03:48 in SoundGym Olympics
Most impressive Kapone Prod at 76!
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SoundGym
Nov 09, 23:54 in BeatRace
@Jose Palacios is BeatRace legend. Congrats for winning!
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@Moritz Bleffert is now a SoundGym certified member. Congratulations Moritz!!
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Btz Thibodeau
Nov 08
That's awesome, congrats and nicely done!
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Steve Rinaldi
Nov 08
Moritz, that's a fantastic accomplishment - congratulations!
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Golden Clark
Nov 09
Big congrats Moritz!
Congrats @Edward Dodd for winning the Golden Ears Award!
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Steve Rinaldi
Nov 08
Edward, way to go! Congrats for winning your golden ears!
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Great work, Edward! Congratulations!
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Golden Clark
Nov 09
Yay Edward; congrats!

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