Hey Taevonn!!! Personally I must say you are already doing an amazing job and are a lot better than me! However, in my opinion, I feel as vocals are the center of almost every song out there. I feel as though there may be too much reverb on your main vocal, or perhaps you should turn the fader up more on the vocal so it 1.) cuts through the mix more and 2.) is more present in the mix. Additionally if you have trouble getting the vocal to cut through the mix I always find parallel compression to do wonders!

P.S. LOVE THE SONG!!!