And this other version with more low end and wider
https://soundcloud.com/elizabeth-cardona-5/tribalenddd?si=565b1f21228348eeafaef17ca5edd032&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Fantastic Track!! Could be placed in a Marvel Black Panther series. Excellent work!

Thank you Gary!!!

This is incredible. I would love to play this at my DJ gigs. Would that be okay? I love this track and your Track13 too.

Hi Eli :) nice project! Nice voices! At first listen, I feel that the percussions slightly cover the kick... I would try with a sidechain compression with the kick. However the kick comes out little, try to bring it slightly forward, not much (for this style) but try not to let it get lost in the mix. Good work :)

@DJ Astrofreq thank you!!! it is really nice to hear that!! I will love that you would play some of my music in your gigs!! unfortunately this tracks were made for a jobs and I'm not sure if it's possible because the copyright. But one of the goals to this year is create some much personal music and I'll have you in mind if you like some of the new tracks ;)

@Vittorio Di Rocco Thank you so much to spend some time to hear it!! I was not happy with that mix and master... and I worked in a new version much cleaner in the middle and much wider...I did some sidechain compression as well and I think the whole mix improved a lot...please tell me what are your thoughs!!
https://soundcloud.com/elizabeth-cardona-5/tribalend_m5-1?si=46b4b81d0d0d4925983484d1142d1508&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Eli !!! I love the intro, I really like it and also how the percussion starts. Now I can hear the break between the percussion and the kick. Great job!!! The break is also nice and then how it starts again. You did a great job, congratulations! Maybe on the high frequencies you gave a little too much air... slightly, nothing too bad... but you could try to lower it by 2 or 3 DB and glue everything on the master bus with slightly more compression, but not much with an SSL (style) bus compressor... even if, I repeat, I really like how your work sounds now :)

thank you Vittorio!! I'm going to check the higher frequencies ✨🎛️🎧

Really nice, love the vibe. I like both of your versions, and for my thoughts, Beats can be less weight and lower in level, Intro might need more and wider ins in the transition before vocal pronounce, vocal can be lower in level, more effects and automation, just in my opinions. Good work :)

Hi. I think Luan is right. Vocals are to loud. But I don't feel the beats to weighty/loud.
All together it's frankly good.