Hey, and welcome. ;)

I'm not even a month here but I daresay you should find the community to your liking.

As for the mix, it's decent, and even though I don't understand the lyrics at all, I like the feel of the track. I like the overall sound. There are moments where there are some minor phase issues but they don't affect the quality of the track. Little to EQ there, it's quite balanced. The dynamics are okay, there is some audible clipping so you might want to tweak the limiting, though the character of the track masks it pretty well. Generally, good job!

Regards,
Tom

Thanks a lot Tom. Really helpful critique. Could you point me to where the phase issues are?

Well done Anish. Well balanced, great arrangement and tasteful use of instruments and reverb etc. I really enjoyed the song and all the interesting ways you developed your musical ideas. The vocals were a real stand out I thought. I look forward to hearing more from you and hopefully seeing you in concert.

Thank you so much David. I'm really glad you enjoyed the song. Appreciate your ear for detail :)

I tried to listen to it but get an error that the file has been removed

@Christian Labeck, @Anish Puthuraya -- Indeed. I've just come home from work and wanted to take a listen to help Anish pinpoint the phase issues, but I'm getting the same error now. Maybe the mix will resurface in the future. ;) In the meantime I have no excuse, so I will move on to everyday chores. ;)

Sorry about that. It should be back up now. Could you please try again Christian and Tom?

@Anish Puthuraya -- Okay, it works now. One example is the guitar riff starting at 3:58, for about its first 10 seconds, where I think there is too much width and the riff is thinner than it could be, unless it is the desired effect (it might be so). A similar thing can be heard in the intro, although less prominently. As I mentioned, the issue is minor and could be left alone or even introduced intentionally. However, should you choose to correct, you might find you like the sound of those sections better.

I see, I think you're right. Those guitars at the end are definitely thin. Thanks a lot for that man. Really appreciate it :)

I can't help you much, since I'm new to all this, but I really loved your song. I enjoyed it so much.

@Anish Puthuraya -- You're welcome. :) A fresh set of impartial ears always helps.

Hello Anish,
Superb song!
For me working a bit more on the kick and snare will definitely be an improvement. Also after listening to your song please use this song -> Santa Monica by Theory Of A Dead Man as your reference track.
Hope I was able to add value to your mixing approach.

@Laura Ali Thanks a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed the track.

@Diego Gamboa I just had a listen, this is a great reference for the song. Thanks for the suggestion :)

Hey Anish, track sounds pretty damn good! Diego gave a great reference track and I definitely think the drums need a bit more of a drive to keep up with the energy of the rest of the track. You can have them sitting behind everything else while still giving them a bit more punch. Try to get more attack out of them with some aggressive EQ boosts and if you have access to a DBX-like compressor you could give that a try, I think it should work pretty well to give the drums some serious punch.

@Ben Sinclair Sorry for the late reply. Thanks a lot :) I'll keep that in mind

dang tracks gone, welcome though