Nice performance. Strikes me as a bit light on the bass. It needs more oomph. Also the kick needs to really land harder. More transient. Let it pierce throught. And then you'll find that the snare also needs to be louder. Vocals needs to be louder. Maybe compress them to get more consistency as well.

thank you Magnus! :) i ll check them out for the video!!😀😀

Interesting fusion here...like some psychadelic rock type of sound...I agree with what Magnus is saying. Maybe try experimenting with Amp effect on the Vocals especially on the chorus 4 dramatic effect. @papa rojas

@Cedz Imagination thank you so much!!😀 i keep listening to it and sub frequencies seems fine to me.but i boosted the kick frequencies wich are 90 to 110 hz.and the vocals i don't think need mor boost.but thanks so much again!! 😀 i will try to listen to it to a different enviroment though. 😀--*EDIT*- the problem was that we missed an octave of sub bass