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Thomas Kumar

Hola Amigos.
I have published my very first track . I know it still needs work in quiet a few areas , I have done it up to my current knowledge level.
Your feedback will be much appreciated .❤
https://soundcloud.com/user-153089263/rumi-when-i-die-bootleg
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Tobias Lütge
Jan 16
I can hear some acid lines in it.
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Kérim S
Jan 17
First track? If you say so 😉 sounds great.
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Colin Aiken
Jan 17
Like the reverb. That EQ sweep was very cool.
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@Kérim S Sorry I meant it as my first published track.
But in general it's my third. Thank you😊
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Jason Lorenzo
Jan 17
Hola Agnese! This sounds fantastic indeed! Love the dark vibe this gives off. It's 4:25 AM in the morning here in Ohio (EST), so I really can't crank it to feel the bass and be consumed in the sound. Though, even at low levels i can still feel it.

The only thing I would say is: that low pass automation peak would sound much better if it peaked exactly when you cut the kick (at 3:22). Start bringing it back in after the kick has stopped. But that is just a matter of preference...

Awesome job!!!
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@Jason Lorenzo Thank you Jason.
I am really happy that you like it.
Good to have feedback from others in the field!
(wish I could produce at nights haha)

I will definitely try it out to hear the difference.
Thank you for the recommendation! 💪
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Lucilius F
Jan 17
Hola, well done really cool classic techno track production wise! The mix though may need some twists imo. Maybe a layered kick or a rumble to add interest and boost it. The acid bass could have a lot more power in general, in the lows (if you dont do a rumble) and in the low mids/mids and could be smeared more too (saturation, exciter,...). Voice very cool, could use a little more reverb /delay to be a little less upfront in the mix.

Impressive job for a third track!
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I Listen to Trance and When listening to yours it sounds like one of the songs that would be put on, in regard to any mixing or production it seems fine as it is im liking the panning and depth of things in it. pretty cool,
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Lucilius F
Jan 17
Probably because of the bass rhythm (the gallop horse one) very common in trance.
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@Lucilius F I had to make the correction to the bass because on the other systems it sounded way too boomy and I might have overdone something to get rid of that ,since I cannot hear the bass properly on my HS7's and I don't know things by heart yet .
I will try out your suggestions though, now I know where I can try to work on !
Thanks alot :)
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@David Sutherland @Colin Aiken @Tobias Lütge Thank you for the Feedback . 😎