Hi Sam! this is a particular style, I would have liked to be able to give you some advice, but we are very far from my standards and it wouldn't be of help to you. However, I can say that listening to the song is pleasant and I have not noticed any problems (as a non-expert in the musical genre) . The atmosphere is created and this is a good result, in my opinion!

at 0:46 i feel some build up/ clash @ the 700hz area when the flute comes in. bring it down a touch and see how it feels

Mix is great already, it feels like everything is done in a small room. Some elements doesn’t align this, and I agree with the clash at 700Hz. A good way to mitigate it is pan one of them away from the center.

Thanks for the feedback. i want it to sound like a band in front of you so i might not pan(because ive already done slight panning) and instead just cut a little with eq

this is cool! a bit too much white noise for my taste. could volume automate the flutes in the intro so they aren't as overwhelming there. Later they're fine! Then in the break around 1:00 until the end they're a back and too loud.

The piano key pressing noises are a bit extreme (sounds cool but artificial).

Yeah mainly EQ work on the flutes and the master probably:) almost there man!