good job! let's look at two things:
guitar - it should be automated and pushed a little deeper into the mix,
vocal - it sounds harsh and cheap. it seems to me if he should return the bells))) just use the multi-band compressor - hold the sharpness a little with one band, and add a low middle with the second band

Hey Sherman, good job! For me as well the vocal sounds a little disconnected from the rest of the song, it lacks a bit of body and the reverb used seem to place it in a different space/room compared to the other elements ;P