Hi lucien
For me your mix sounds good. Especially how you treated your guitars, and panned them. And your vocals were cohesive as they didnt stand out because there was no point in it. Very good!

So only comment would be to beware out of control bass and kick resonances. compressing and/or dynamic eq would be a nice way to approach it, if you want.

Hey, this is cool Lucien, I especially like the panny shaker, and how the beat drives. I was concentrating so much on giving the bass sub, that maybe the beat took a back-seat in terms of providing solid drive. I like your approach!

thanks all, for your comment ;)