Mixdown practicing&learning

MAGGHY JI

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SERZH MUSIC
Jan 15
Hello everyone !
Today I finished mixing this wonderful song. Please listen and evaluate my work, I will be grateful to you.
Regarding the drum kit not separated by different soundtracks - of course it is inconvenient, but we beginners need to learn how to work with different material.
I do mastering from the very beginning together with mixing, so I post one version.
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Glenn Mc Phee - “A Sailor Once More”
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1N5fonRVm65uK3QsPYa-7Opql9fJPuKzv/view?usp=sharing
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Mark Opfer
Jan 16
Cool mix! I think the guitars on the wings are a little to prominent. They distract me from the rest of the song and make it feel a little crowded,
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SERZH MUSIC
Jan 16
Thank you for your feedback !
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MAGGHY JI
Jan 17
Hey Serzh, good mix! I hear a bit of confusion on the low-mids, the bass especially, seems too strong for me, and tends to hide the vocals, vocals that could be more present.. ;P
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SERZH MUSIC
Jan 17
Thank you for your time and feedback!)
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Andy Pinzon
Jan 17
Hi Serzh, nice mix but i think that the high frecuencies, especially on the hi-hat were a little too high but in general, the balance of the mix was great for me.
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SERZH MUSIC
Jan 17
Thank you so much for your feedback !
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Hey @SERZH MUSIC, Great Mix. The verb on the backing vocals dominates the space towards the end of the song. There is a midrange build-up, maybe think about thinking out some elements to create some more space.
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SERZH MUSIC
Jan 17
Thank you so much for your feedback ! Because of the online translator, I'm not quite sure I understood you exactly. Did you mean that the backing vocals are louder than the main vocals at the end of the music ?

If you mean the artistic component of my information, then this is one thing
If you think I made a technical mistake, then this is different
I would like to understand exactly )
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Ben Sinclair
Jan 17
Hey Serzh, really solid mix! I enjoyed it and think you did a great job with balance/volume etc... I do think the bass is a bit buried at points and probably being masked by something. I feel like I've typed this comment out a lot for a few of these mixes but the acoustics may be the culprit, they play throughout the entire song with the bass so they're probably responsible.
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SERZH MUSIC
Jan 17
Thank you very much! I will definitely take into account all the comments, they help us progress and get better!