I like the delays on the themed guitars, really cool!
I think there is a bit too much mud, the bass seems to be taking a bit too much space in the 200ish range.
The master is cleaner in that regard but I think the problem persists, I feel like the bass and 200 range is getting way too much attention, I'm hearing a continuous vrooominess if that makes any sense.
Apart from that I like it very much.

Yes it's true. thanks for your comment

тебе я и так уже всё сказал))))
кошмар! так много миксов, все не переслушать!)

Hey @Dzianis Lazikevich , Listening to the Mix version. To my ears the vroom sounds like the release on the bass guitar is too fast. It's flattening the tail of each note.

Watch the boxiness on the snare, it seems to occupy a little too much space. From memory that was coming from the room mics.

I hear you had some fun with the delays. Nice job.