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sam lim
Mar 18, 2023
HEy guys I made a song recently and was looking for constructive criticism
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Justin Brooks
Mar 18, 2023
drop it
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JoΓ£o Freitas Darui
Mar 19, 2023
Thats niice!
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This is amazing!
You're a fan of cymatics' productions, too, I would guess because that Drum loop is more than familiar to my earsπŸ˜€πŸ˜ I like the alternations and arrangement of it, really lays out the nicely structured foundation for the track perfectly πŸ‘Œ

The guitar sounds really clean and crisp. I can't tell if it's the progression, or really another loop that you used, but I feel I recognize them from somewhere, don't seem to remember exactlyπŸ€”

Even the vocals, don't ask me why, but I could've sworn that I heard them before. The Lyrics have many similarities with a track I heard either during a sample flip or a viewer submission in BigDuckEnergy's twitch stream community, but the vocalist was someone else i believe.
If you did the vocals, please tell me if my memory is messing with me or notπŸ˜… Your voice is very smooth and the timber was made for this overall vibe and theme of the track!

Maybe it's really just my mind playing tricks on me, but I would say this is an ingeniously creation, combining the right elements of multiple, more or less popular, very high quality sources in a simple, but effectively beautiful way.

I really hope that it's not, but if none of the above is even remotely close and everything in this track is fully and solely created by you, I apologize big time. You can think of this as a This is so good, it's probably made by industry leaders compliment πŸ˜…πŸ˜ŒπŸ™
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The Rainmaker
Mar 19, 2023
nice well done!
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sam lim
Mar 20, 2023
@Mark Phillip Marphy Horch So, i did everything except for the beat and I have no idea what bigduckenergy is lol. Might have to check it out. Thank you for the kind words I really appreciate it πŸ˜„
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Hmm, I see. With the Beat I was 100% certain, so that was expected. Do you count the guitar sample to the Beat, as i it obviously is part of the instrumental? Just to clarify , as I'm really interested to why the progression sounds so familiar πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”
The vocals really still remind of something I heard in that twitch community, though the internet is pretty big, it's been quite often that I see something somewhere, that I know from a completely unrelated place by random chance πŸ˜…

Might be the algorithms and shared interests or idk what in this universe causes it, but I'm sure you know what I mean πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈπŸ™ƒ

I would like to know where you got your inspiration for this track from, as the lyrics remind me of something I can't quite pin point exactly. Maybe what inspired you is the reason why I think that I've heard them or something similar before?
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Zeti yeti
Mar 21, 2023
Not bad, just lack a little bit of punchiness.
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sam lim
Mar 25, 2023
@Mark Phillip Marphy Horch Honestly my cousin inspired me because he's been feeling worthless the last few years. And I added some stuff from my perspective. It wasnt something I heard or read; I just wrote it in the car lol