Hey everyone I need some critique. I've been writing my own music for a while and attempting to mix it forever. I've seen a million YouTube videos and have all kinds of plugins but just can't understand what I need to be doing. I recorded a super short loop and mixed it some if any one wants to give me some feed back. For context it's modern metal. Thank you! I want to post this in mix critiques but can't for whatever reason.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1O-L1SMSkcst46TGHf8aY4gbjtHoNyRgB/view?usp=drivesdk