Giovanni! I just want to start of by saying that you already doing this at 16 with this amount of intent and focus is very impressive. I don't even know what I did at your age but it sure as hell wasn't what you're doing. Keep it up!

I took a listen to non so cosa vuoi dirmi and these are the notes I have made:

1. The most obvious is how far back the lead vocal is in the mix. You could easily turn them up a notch while also carving out space for them from competing instruments (google lead vocal sitting in pocket to find tutorials).

2. The guitar coming in at 1:24 is too present for my liking. I would both turn it down a bit as well as take out some high mids from them.

3. Just an overall tip. Try to start listening to music actively. This means to pay attention to your favorite artists sound selection, how the songs are mixed as well as overall arrangement. Arrangement is huge in creating palletable music and focusing on that will never go wrong.

I will stop there for now as I see no point in continuing pointing out minute mixing details.
My most important tip to you by far though is to get more experience. So continue writing and producing more songs. That will teach you more than any feedback will ever give you. It will develop your own signature sound which is very important for artists such as yourself. While feedback is good it's very seldom 100% objective. It's often based on people's own musical taste which makes it fundamentally complicated.

Let me repeat myself Giovanni. The fact that you're this far along mindset wise at 16 years old is a MASSIVE gift. Nurture it.

Good luck and keep creating! =)

thank you so much for your feedback!
the next time I will lower a bit the guitar and when I have some free time I will go search how to make the lead vocal sit in the pocket.
thanks!

Ciao Giovanni :) ti scrivo in italiano così faccio prima. Concordo pienamente con i consigli di John Ackerberg. Continua a sperimentare e a lavorare tutti i giorni... sei talmente giovane che se ti impegni un giorno raccoglierai ottimi risultati. Unico consiglio, attenzione sempre con gli effetti; è molto facile farsi prendere la mano. Cerca sempre di tenere la voce in primo piano: in questa traccia basterebbe forse abbassare il delay e riverbero che prende troppo spazio sui Side. Buona musica a presto :)

grazie mille! prossima volta sarò più consapevole degli effetti

You have some great ideas and intuition! I am sure others have mentioned these items, but I don't know Italian. In (non stare in) silenzio the chorusing vocal effect is a little too forward and thick. This makes it difficult to hear your lead vocal clearly. Lower the volume of that part and decrease the delay by a few milliseconds for clarity and cohesion.

I really liked -trucco=+bella. The sub bass was quite a lot though. I think toning that down just a touch will help highlight that excellent snare sample and tighten up the song overall. Also, again I don't know Italian, so I have no idea what the song is about, but that lets me focus on the feeling and rhythm. The vocal lines do not always sit very well with the underlying rhythm of the bass and drums.

I think it is much better at your stage to be going overboard and needing to pull elements back than to be too timid and limiting yourself. I appreciate your drive and creativity and hope you continue to make music.

thank you so much!